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GBTtown posted a comment on Sunday 23rd February 2014 1:27pm

Awesome story, even the second time thru!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Tuesday 9th April 2013 2:57am

I truly enjoyed this story - the focus on Remus was superb. Something about the way Harry's thoughts were related seemed very true - there was less orderliness that lent a verisimilitude. The prophecy seemed pretty self-evident - and I'm glad Harry figured it out at the last minute. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel. Thanks for posting!

HGRHfan35 posted a comment on Monday 25th October 2010 1:57pm

I always feel so sorry for Ginny when she sees him with someone else. Men!!! :D

I'm re-reading this whilst waiting for a long awaited update *hintnudge*

Hugzzzz. C

HellsMaji posted a comment on Friday 30th October 2009 5:55pm

Awesome story. The only disappointment so far is that Cho is the center of Harry's thought's so much. I hope it's not the case for much longer ^^

serenity16 posted a comment on Saturday 5th September 2009 11:19am

wow awesome story. Is there a sequal?

Neurotica posted a comment on Monday 17th August 2009 2:54pm

So I was reading this story ages ago when it was on fanfiction.net, but lost track of it when you took it down and moved it. I've been looking for it for several months, but couldn't remember your pen name or the full name of the story. I am very glad to have found it again and am enjoying the apparent rewrite of the first chapter. Can't wait to catch up on the story! Thanks for writing this!

ClaMiAl posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd July 2009 1:22pm

Wow! What an amazing story! I had a great time reading it. It's very original, with lots of twists and surprises. And all through it, you managed to keep the characters in character and events and reactions and the different characters' points of view believable and realistic.

And there was never a dull moment! So many story have spots where they are just a bit boring, sort of filler parts that are necessary to get to the next exciting bits. But this story had nothing like that! Every chapter had me wanting to go on reading the next one, and frustrated if I had to take a break from reading in order to sleep or go to class. You've done an amazing job with this fic! Thanks so much for writing it!

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Saturday 2nd May 2009 7:46pm

First of all, it is quite notable to take any work and carry it this long all the way through to an ending of sorts. This is quite good. I think your best parts are some of the little things that just worked. Some of the ones that come to mind are Frank the snake, the little bug that wouldn't die, Susan and Harry's interest in art, and even the pair of drawn hands.

The prophecy was okay, even though it was easy to figure out before the main characters. The bit about someones son dying seemed a bit forced when it was first introduced, but maybe I miseed an earlier refence.

Again, overall this was quite good. Thanks for sharing it.

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks very much for your feedback.

Cheers,

Lady Alchymia

Sandrine Lupin posted a comment on Monday 2nd March 2009 9:32am

hello,
I have already read this story in version 1 but I re-read it now. Do you have all the chapters already written in one file (like for V1) or not ? Because it is more simple for me to print it in one file than chapter by chapter.
It is so a wonderful story I really wait to arrive at the last chapters to read the following of this story.
I really hope that Harry and Susan go on together ...
I must continue to read now.
good luck for the chapters in writing.
thanks for your work
sandrine

Lady Alchymia replied:

Hi there,

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you for your good wishes!  (Sorry, I don't have a single file.)

Kindly,

Lady Alchymia

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 19th February 2009 8:30am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks, Gunny.

Lady Alchymia

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 19th February 2009 7:02am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thank you.

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Thursday 19th February 2009 6:38am

Good chapter.


gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks!

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 4:13pm

Bummer, some people are soooooo dumb.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Extremely true!  They'll believe the worst so much more easily than the best.

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 2:57pm

Very good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Glad you liked it, thanks!

Lady Alchymia

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 12:15pm

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks very much.

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 11:22am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thank you kindly.

Lady Alchymia

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 10:40am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks very much.

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 9:18am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thank you.

Lady A

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 8:37am

Good chapter.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks kindly.

Lady Alchymia

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Wednesday 18th February 2009 7:51am

Good chapter, good ole Hermione, gotta love her.

gunny

Lady Alchymia replied:

Thanks, Gunny.  Yes, Hermione is a real treasure :).

Lady A